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view this post on Zulip Github Notifications (FHIRcast) (Apr 30 2019 at 19:53):

hl7-fhircast-bot opened Issue #175

## May 2019 Ballot Comment:

Submitted by Anthony Julian
Chapter/section: Overview
Url: https://fhircast.hl7.org/specification/May2019Ballot/index.html
Type: NEG :exclamation: Clarification
In Person requested: Yes :bust_in_silhouette:

Summary:

Comment: The Overview should be written such that a person unfamiliar could grasp the purpose of the document. The first paragraph of "Security Considerations" (which does not seem to be part of the ballot) is an excellent start.


_This issue was imported by @hl7-fhircast-bot from the consolidated FHIRcast May 2019 ballot spreadsheet._

view this post on Zulip Github Notifications (FHIRcast) (Apr 30 2019 at 19:53):

hl7-fhircast-bot labeled Issue #175

## May 2019 Ballot Comment:

Submitted by Anthony Julian
Chapter/section: Overview
Url: https://fhircast.hl7.org/specification/May2019Ballot/index.html
Type: NEG :exclamation: Clarification
In Person requested: Yes :bust_in_silhouette:

Summary:

Comment: The Overview should be written such that a person unfamiliar could grasp the purpose of the document. The first paragraph of "Security Considerations" (which does not seem to be part of the ballot) is an excellent start.


_This issue was imported by @hl7-fhircast-bot from the consolidated FHIRcast May 2019 ballot spreadsheet._

view this post on Zulip Github Notifications (FHIRcast) (Apr 30 2019 at 19:53):

hl7-fhircast-bot labeled Issue #175

## May 2019 Ballot Comment:

Submitted by Anthony Julian
Chapter/section: Overview
Url: https://fhircast.hl7.org/specification/May2019Ballot/index.html
Type: NEG :exclamation: Clarification
In Person requested: Yes :bust_in_silhouette:

Summary:

Comment: The Overview should be written such that a person unfamiliar could grasp the purpose of the document. The first paragraph of "Security Considerations" (which does not seem to be part of the ballot) is an excellent start.


_This issue was imported by @hl7-fhircast-bot from the consolidated FHIRcast May 2019 ballot spreadsheet._

view this post on Zulip Github Notifications (FHIRcast) (Apr 30 2019 at 19:53):

hl7-fhircast-bot labeled Issue #175

## May 2019 Ballot Comment:

Submitted by Anthony Julian
Chapter/section: Overview
Url: https://fhircast.hl7.org/specification/May2019Ballot/index.html
Type: NEG :exclamation: Clarification
In Person requested: Yes :bust_in_silhouette:

Summary:

Comment: The Overview should be written such that a person unfamiliar could grasp the purpose of the document. The first paragraph of "Security Considerations" (which does not seem to be part of the ballot) is an excellent start.


_This issue was imported by @hl7-fhircast-bot from the consolidated FHIRcast May 2019 ballot spreadsheet._

view this post on Zulip Github Notifications (FHIRcast) (Apr 30 2019 at 19:53):

hl7-fhircast-bot edited Issue #175

## May 2019 Ballot Comment:

Submitted by Anthony Julian
Chapter/section: Overview
Url: https://fhircast.hl7.org/specification/May2019Ballot/index.html
Type: NEG :exclamation: Clarification
In Person requested: Yes :bust_in_silhouette:

Summary:

Comment: The Overview should be written such that a person unfamiliar could grasp the purpose of the document. The first paragraph of "Security Considerations" (which does not seem to be part of the ballot) is an excellent start.


_This issue was imported by @hl7-fhircast-bot from the consolidated FHIRcast May 2019 ballot spreadsheet._

view this post on Zulip Github Notifications (FHIRcast) (May 06 2019 at 20:50):

NiklasSvenzen labeled Issue #175

## May 2019 Ballot Comment:

Submitted by Anthony Julian
Chapter/section: Overview
Url: https://fhircast.hl7.org/specification/May2019Ballot/index.html
Type: NEG :exclamation: Clarification
In Person requested: Yes :bust_in_silhouette:

Summary:

Comment: The Overview should be written such that a person unfamiliar could grasp the purpose of the document. The first paragraph of "Security Considerations" (which does not seem to be part of the ballot) is an excellent start.


_This issue was imported by @hl7-fhircast-bot from the consolidated FHIRcast May 2019 ballot spreadsheet._

view this post on Zulip Github Notifications (FHIRcast) (May 06 2019 at 20:53):

NiklasSvenzen commented on Issue #175

Agreed, the specification gets a little to much into the weeds in the overview. Suggest we lift in parts from the "Security Considerations" and move some of the technical details further into the document

view this post on Zulip Github Notifications (FHIRcast) (May 21 2019 at 13:17):

wmaethner commented on Issue #175:

Resolved in #179

view this post on Zulip Github Notifications (FHIRcast) (May 21 2019 at 13:17):

wmaethner labeled Issue #175:

## May 2019 Ballot Comment:

Submitted by Anthony Julian
Chapter/section: Overview
Url: https://fhircast.hl7.org/specification/May2019Ballot/index.html
Type: NEG :exclamation: Clarification
In Person requested: Yes :bust_in_silhouette:

Summary:

Comment: The Overview should be written such that a person unfamiliar could grasp the purpose of the document. The first paragraph of "Security Considerations" (which does not seem to be part of the ballot) is an excellent start.


_This issue was imported by @hl7-fhircast-bot from the consolidated FHIRcast May 2019 ballot spreadsheet._

view this post on Zulip Github Notifications (FHIRcast) (Sep 11 2019 at 20:41):

wmaethner closed Issue #175:

May 2019 Ballot Comment:

Submitted by Anthony Julian
Chapter/section: Overview
Url: https://fhircast.hl7.org/specification/May2019Ballot/index.html
Type: NEG :exclamation: Clarification
In Person requested: Yes :bust_in_silhouette:

Summary:

Comment: The Overview should be written such that a person unfamiliar could grasp the purpose of the document. The first paragraph of "Security Considerations" (which does not seem to be part of the ballot) is an excellent start.


_This issue was imported by @hl7-fhircast-bot from the consolidated FHIRcast May 2019 ballot spreadsheet._


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