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view this post on Zulip Github Notifications (FHIRcast) (Apr 30 2019 at 19:52):

hl7-fhircast-bot opened Issue #130

## May 2019 Ballot Comment: Enhance the sentence to provide a better understanding from the reader

Submitted by Ricardo Quintano Neira on behalf of @bvdh
Chapter/section: Subscription Request
Url: https://fhircast.hl7.org/specification/May2019Ballot/index.html
Type: A-S Correction

Summary: Enhance the sentence to provide a better understanding from the reader

Comment: "with the following parameters, authenticating with the Bearer access token."

Not a clear sentence. I suggest to enhance the sentence to provide a better understanding from the reader.

Existing wording: To create a subscription, the subscribing app performs an HTTP POST (RFC7231) to the Hub's base url (as specified in cast-hub) with the following parameters, authenticating with the Bearer access token.


_This issue was imported by @hl7-fhircast-bot from the consolidated FHIRcast May 2019 ballot spreadsheet._

view this post on Zulip Github Notifications (FHIRcast) (Apr 30 2019 at 19:52):

hl7-fhircast-bot labeled Issue #130

## May 2019 Ballot Comment: Enhance the sentence to provide a better understanding from the reader

Submitted by Ricardo Quintano Neira on behalf of @bvdh
Chapter/section: Subscription Request
Url: https://fhircast.hl7.org/specification/May2019Ballot/index.html
Type: A-S Correction

Summary: Enhance the sentence to provide a better understanding from the reader

Comment: "with the following parameters, authenticating with the Bearer access token."

Not a clear sentence. I suggest to enhance the sentence to provide a better understanding from the reader.

Existing wording: To create a subscription, the subscribing app performs an HTTP POST (RFC7231) to the Hub's base url (as specified in cast-hub) with the following parameters, authenticating with the Bearer access token.


_This issue was imported by @hl7-fhircast-bot from the consolidated FHIRcast May 2019 ballot spreadsheet._

view this post on Zulip Github Notifications (FHIRcast) (Apr 30 2019 at 19:52):

hl7-fhircast-bot edited Issue #130

## May 2019 Ballot Comment: Enhance the sentence to provide a better understanding from the reader

Submitted by Ricardo Quintano Neira on behalf of @bvdh
Chapter/section: Subscription Request
Url: https://fhircast.hl7.org/specification/May2019Ballot/index.html
Type: A-S Correction

Summary: Enhance the sentence to provide a better understanding from the reader

Comment: "with the following parameters, authenticating with the Bearer access token."

Not a clear sentence. I suggest to enhance the sentence to provide a better understanding from the reader.

Existing wording: To create a subscription, the subscribing app performs an HTTP POST (RFC7231) to the Hub's base url (as specified in cast-hub) with the following parameters, authenticating with the Bearer access token.


_This issue was imported by @hl7-fhircast-bot from the consolidated FHIRcast May 2019 ballot spreadsheet._

view this post on Zulip Github Notifications (FHIRcast) (May 30 2019 at 02:53):

isaacvetter commented on Issue #130:

Hey @bvdh, do you have a suggested wording for this?

How about:
Proposed wording: To create a subscription, the subscribing authenticates with the Bearer access token as part of an HTTP POST (RFC7231) to the Hub's base url (as specified in cast-hub) with the following parameters.

view this post on Zulip Github Notifications (FHIRcast) (Jun 18 2019 at 05:34):

bvdh commented on Issue #130:

The sentence is better.

In line with #118, this should be revised to:
To create a subscription, the subscribing SHALL perform an HTTP POST (RFC7231) to the Hub's base url (as specified in cast-hub) with the following parameters.
...
after table
....
In OAuth2 authentication is used (as is recommended), this POST request SHALL contain the Bearer access token.

view this post on Zulip Github Notifications (FHIRcast) (Jun 27 2019 at 14:52):

wmaethner labeled Issue #130:

## May 2019 Ballot Comment: Enhance the sentence to provide a better understanding from the reader

Submitted by Ricardo Quintano Neira on behalf of @bvdh
Chapter/section: Subscription Request
Url: https://fhircast.hl7.org/specification/May2019Ballot/index.html
Type: A-S Correction

Summary: Enhance the sentence to provide a better understanding from the reader

Comment: "with the following parameters, authenticating with the Bearer access token."

Not a clear sentence. I suggest to enhance the sentence to provide a better understanding from the reader.

Existing wording: To create a subscription, the subscribing app performs an HTTP POST (RFC7231) to the Hub's base url (as specified in cast-hub) with the following parameters, authenticating with the Bearer access token.


_This issue was imported by @hl7-fhircast-bot from the consolidated FHIRcast May 2019 ballot spreadsheet._

view this post on Zulip Github Notifications (FHIRcast) (Jun 27 2019 at 14:52):

isaacvetter commented on Issue #130:

## :telephone_receiver: II Working Group Vote (5-30-2019)

Meeting notes: https://confluence.hl7.org/display/IMIN/Teleconferences

Martin Bellehumeur moved the following disposition, seconded by Ricardo Quintano Neira

Disposition: Persuasive with Mod
Disposition Comment: Will do as suggested by @bvdh, like so:

To create a subscription, the subscribing SHALL perform an HTTP POST (RFC7231) to the Hub's base url (as specified in cast-hub) with the following parameters.
...
after table
....
If OAuth2 authentication is used, this POST request SHALL contain the Bearer access token in the HTTP Authorization header.

:+1: For: 8
:expressionless: Abstain: 0
:-1: Against: 0

:tada: The motion passed! :tada:

view this post on Zulip Github Notifications (FHIRcast) (Jun 28 2019 at 14:15):

wmaethner labeled Issue #130:

## May 2019 Ballot Comment: Enhance the sentence to provide a better understanding from the reader

Submitted by Ricardo Quintano Neira on behalf of @bvdh
Chapter/section: Subscription Request
Url: https://fhircast.hl7.org/specification/May2019Ballot/index.html
Type: A-S Correction

Summary: Enhance the sentence to provide a better understanding from the reader

Comment: "with the following parameters, authenticating with the Bearer access token."

Not a clear sentence. I suggest to enhance the sentence to provide a better understanding from the reader.

Existing wording: To create a subscription, the subscribing app performs an HTTP POST (RFC7231) to the Hub's base url (as specified in cast-hub) with the following parameters, authenticating with the Bearer access token.


_This issue was imported by @hl7-fhircast-bot from the consolidated FHIRcast May 2019 ballot spreadsheet._

view this post on Zulip Github Notifications (FHIRcast) (Aug 19 2019 at 14:09):

wmaethner closed Issue #130:

May 2019 Ballot Comment: Enhance the sentence to provide a better understanding from the reader

Submitted by Ricardo Quintano Neira on behalf of @bvdh
Chapter/section: Subscription Request
Url: https://fhircast.hl7.org/specification/May2019Ballot/index.html
Type: A-S Correction

Summary: Enhance the sentence to provide a better understanding from the reader

Comment: "with the following parameters, authenticating with the Bearer access token."

Not a clear sentence. I suggest to enhance the sentence to provide a better understanding from the reader.

Existing wording: To create a subscription, the subscribing app performs an HTTP POST (RFC7231) to the Hub's base url (as specified in cast-hub) with the following parameters, authenticating with the Bearer access token.


_This issue was imported by @hl7-fhircast-bot from the consolidated FHIRcast May 2019 ballot spreadsheet._


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